Thursday, January 12, 2012

Theme Thursday.....VIEW

Where is the dance?

The dance floor was polished, but what could be done with a floor that was over eighty years old.
It had a sheen that reminded one of old leather carefully rubbed with oil, so as to make it feel warm not cold.
The scuff marks and scratches stood out, testaments to the dances that had occurred for all these years.
The dancers had moved to the music, their shoes, shuffling, scraping, keeping beat to the music one hears.

The floor had watched dancers come and go over time, some came only once, others spent years of dancing on his boards.
Sometimes he had felt the first stirrings of love between couples, he knew what it was heading towards.
Some stayed together and then they would dance on him less and less.
Over time they would stop by to bring their little ones for lessons, he enjoyed them, he had to confess.




Young girls who started out so shy, afraid to let go of their mother's hand.
They would learn to dance after many weeks of listening to the music from the band.
Their bodies swaying and sashaying all across his floors, from one side to the other side of the room.
He would hope that their love of dance would grow for it was through them that his future did loom.

He enjoyed the many days the boys and girls got their lessons and how he saw their abilities grow.
After months of being used by all of their feet, he got to feel them on the nights they would put on a show.
Parents who had walked and danced all over him once upon a time,
Were now clapping, clicking cameras of their youngsters, and telling others that one is mine.

The weekends had continued to be the time for couples to dance the night away.
For many years he had enjoyed the feel of their feet, gliding and flowing, it felt good he had to say.
Then he noticed that there were not as many little girls and boys coming for the lessons being taught.
The evening had fewer couples showing up even on the weekend, he saw the look of worry on the owners face he now caught.

That last year almost no one showed up to move across and dance around his floor any more.
He wondered where is the dance, where do they go to dance, he wanted to shout and roar?
But there was no sound that his boards could make without the feet moving and walking.
On the day they closed after eighty years of laughter and joy, he wanted to weep, cause he knew that was the end of his talking.

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12 comments:

  1. What a wonderful post from the floor's point of view. My husband and I took ballroom dance lessons for a while when we were first married and it brought back so many fond memories.

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  2. Hello! Mrs.U...
    What an excellent write [and read] from the floor POV...It kind Of, remind me Of that perennial saying: "If Only Walls Could Talk..."

    Thanks, for sharing!
    [I hope that you had a peaceful, reflective, holiday season...too!]
    deedee :-D

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  3. oh, what a wonderful journey you took me on your writing. the emotion behind your writing is marvelous. i felt for the floor. i always found it amazing if a writer can write for an inanimate object. this is wonderful. loved it!

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  4. def a very nice tke on the theme mrsu...where is the dance...my wife being a ballet dancer, dance has played a large role in our live...taken ballroom and folk myself...even a little ballet...but yes, the club is about the only place you find it these days..

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  5. That was a really lovely narrative which reflected on a time gone by - a memory captured in a moment with words like the music that was played there, once upon a time. If this poem were a color, it would be in shades like sepia and brown. ☼

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  6. Sad for the floor, eh? I love wood. Love the smell of it, the feel of it, the colours of it. This is a fabulous write.

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  7. Really thanks by stopping by , I enjoyed your site and im following you, love this you write today.
    Love dance too:)I hope you visit me, Ill appreciate and I m sure to visit you (lol)

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  8. Awww. I have two left feet but my daughter in law loves to dance so....I identify

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  9. If the dance floor could read this, it would be awed by your wonderfully apt description of its feelings! :)

    I really liked it. :)

    And, thank you so much for the appreciation. :)
    If not for your prompt, maybe the poem wouldn't have itself written. :)

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  10. Ah, If floors could talk of their history. Brilliant voice. Happy TT. -J

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  11. What a nice little write for the dance floor! Thanks for sharing it.

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  12. Yes, what a wonderful poem for the dance floor. I felt a little sad for it at the end. I've been meaning to stop by for TT, but haven't made it yet. Your comment for WW made me laugh. The best way to get me to talk is to tell me not too! haha

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Thank you for the visit and I want to say "Hi",
Plus, I love comments from everyone who stops on by.
I hope you will leave a comment for me to see,
Then I can visit you, and leave one that's from me.